Sunday, November 9, 2014

Soldier of KOS excerpt

He couldn’t see it very clearly, but he could make out the curly hair well enough. It was a large dog. Its fur was a dusty grey. It was matted and had some prickly plants sticking in it. It ran at a good speed. From its large build, it must’ve been a stray of sorts. After a few minutes of running, he figured the beast wouldn’t come back around his home.
He stopped his chase and began to catch his breath. He looked up and hissed. He was farther away from his home then he expected to be. He turned to walk back and froze as he felt something holding onto his fire poker. He slowly turned his head to get a look at what had grabbed a hold of his weapon.
Giant almond eyes stared up at him. The dog now held the fire poker with its large paw. But the paw looked more like a fuzzy human hand then it did a paw. His eyes widened as he counted the five distinct fingers that gripped the poker. Before his brain could process everything, the dog stood on its hind legs and leaned in close to his face. Its breath was hot and smelled of fresh berries.
What an odd scent for a dog’s breath. He thought as he was assaulted with the scent.
“You’re the CorraidhĂ­n[1]?” It sounded more annoyed then angry. It let out a puff of hot air in his face. “I guess it can’t be helped.” It hoisted the young boy up with its other hand. He was now dangling mere inches from the beast’s face. It turned and began to cart him off into the woods.
His brain that had been screaming, “RUN!” finally got control of his body. He screamed as he tried to swing the figure poker. The poker made contact, but because of his size, it did no damage.
“It’s not nice to hit people.” It grabbed the iron bar and tossed it away.
He felt his freedom slip away with the echoing thud of iron on wood.



[1] Ancient Irish, means “Little Spear” 

A little bit more from the thing I'm attempting to write for NaNoWriMo

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